Wednesday, May 18, 2011

What can I do to make my blog better?

3 comments:

  1. you could have added just a tiny bit f more voice in some of your paragraphs, just a tiny bit more.

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  2. You could have made the titles more clear. I couldnt really tell what the title was.

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  3. I think if you added your voice into your paragraphs a little bit more, your blog would be even better!

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